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Haha

You do good job chasing monks!

Great!

Haha, nice work man, sounds were clear and it had a nice layout. I like how you used the actual in game menu :p
Although I would have like to see some better quality pictures for the background.

It's good to see there are some other Wolf ET players who know how to use flash :D

Nice.

Great layout, navigation and presentation. Was pretty easy to follow.

Just a few suggestions on your walk cycles.
See if you can sorta make them a little more fluent/smooth. I pretty much use the same technique, yet those cycles seemed to always snap around in the loop, if ya get me :/
I think it's because you didn't use that many keyframes for the cycle. Usually you require a lot more frames since walking is a slow movement. Yours sorta seemed like a power walk.
Also, with the arms, I find that they naturally tend to swing with the opposite leg.

But yeah anyway, it was pretty good for a basic walk cycle and seemed like a great tutorial for beginner animators. You have the technique down pat, just need a little better execution. Practice makes perfect :P
Keep it up man.

StillBeatingPictures responds:

yeah, it could probably work better with more frames in the cycle, but then again if you throw a 30 frame cycle at someone, it can be intimidating =D

thanks for your review!

Haha

That was so lame it was funny.
You had some pretty good comical timing with some of the jokes, even though they were pretty lame. But a few of them, such as the basketball one and the car one were good. That kid came out of no where to reject the ball back into his face.
If you're gonna make another one. Come up with some new ones, spend a lot of time on your graphics, don't use sticks, include some music with it and appropriate sound effects, and improve your voice acting. But keep the timing and stuff that you had in this one.
So basically, it was a good idea, isn't really original, but some of the deaths were kinda lame but funny :/ but your graphics weren;t too good, which is vital to getting a good score.
Good luck with stuff in the future.

Graeme responds:

Graphics are definatly being improved for #2. this was a beginner flash. glad you appreciate the timing of some of them. sound effects are another thing thats definatly being redone.

The only think it your wiew on it being non-sticks. i know there are people who hate sticks, but i like them. and i would hate to animate alot of that using not sticks. and if i used full body for the second one, it wouldn't even feel like a sequel.

Wooo!

Nice game for the 4 hours you spent on it, man!
I like the concept and everything.
I was pretty shite at it though :/

Happy Luis day!

-CP

Very nice work!

Hey and well done.
This was very professional I thought. Good layouts, appropriate sounds and voices. Decent graphics, easy and creative gameplay.
Very nice work.
5'd :P

Winner!

Seriously. This was very very nice. The graphics were very cool, the rad arcade style of the whole game, graphics, sound, music, controls...
The voice overs were very cool, they added that extra authenticity and a professional feel to which made it feel like more than a flash game.
Good violence and everything. Gameplay was challenging, and took a bit to get use to but still great.
Awesome work!

BoMToons responds:

Thanks a lot, that makes all this work worth it, that's exactly the feel we were going for...the fun arcadey street-fighter feel. Glad you liked it!

yeah its a good concept...

but yeah at first i was like...this game is wicked, the graphics are cool and its sounds like a fun game. I got into it and i was enjoying it....for about 2 minutes, and then it started to get incredibly repetitive. I dont know but it became boring. I was hoping for some powerups, the speed to get faster or more birds or enemies to come rushing at me, all i got was some different backgrounds and different homes to deliver to. Yeah its a good concept, is graphically pleasing, easy and smooth gameplay and suitable music and sounds, but what it really needs to do is keep the player entertained.
Anyway i hope i dont sound like a fuckwit...but yeah thats what i thought of this game.

Keep up the cool work.

sweet game man.

This is one of the better cursor games...I have one myself and it was the first game i had ever made and its not that good. This game is smooth, cheat proof, fun, and addictive (until you finish).
The only thing i suggest that would make this game better would be to work a bit more on the graphics...dont make it too fancy or some shit like that...im just saying i thought some of the colours were a bit dull. Anyway....this is a great game, keep up the good work.

Wicked game man...

This is such a great game i was playin it for about an hour. The first time I played i got to the final stage and then lost and then the second time i pretty much dominated the purple bees.
Sweet ass graphics, and the style was pretty cool, it was really fun, supported by the feaures and stuff like the powerups.
Sound effects were well done...haha mad little catchy music. Violence was wicked..bees going kamakazi into hives...oh yeah!
Interactivity...awesome...i thought the control over the bees were cool, and you only had to use the mouse. There was a little thing that I found annoying which was how when you verse the boss and your holding down the shield and as soon as u pick up the rocket it fires straight away...i was thinking it would be better if you had to click again to fire it. It isnt a huge problem or anything just letting you know.
Humor...bees with sheilds defending their hives and taking over other bees territories by headbutting their hives...haha pretty funny...but also very fun to play.
Overall man yeah i gave you a ten becasue it got me hooked from when i began playing...i found it a bit hard to know what everything is and does and how to play because the "help" buttons were hard to notice. And i dont think it was a good idea to put a link in the window of the game. I accidently clicked it defending myself and the site popped up and covered the games window and i almost lost the battle!! aaarrrghhhh.
But yeah awesome game nice work!!!

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